The attached ALAC Comments [PDF, 178K], were initially composed by Sebastien Bachollet, Chair of the At-Large working group on the Future Structure and Governance of ICANN. The original text was made available for At-Large community comment on 19 th November 2009.
This text was also discussed during a teleconference of the At-Large Working Group on the Future Structure, Accountability and Transparency of ICANN that took place on 27 November 2009.
Rev2 of the text, prepared by Sebastien Bachollet with assistance from Adam Peake, incorporates comments received from the At-Large community and the members of the At-Large Working Group on the Future Structure, Accountability and Transparency of ICANN.
Rev3 of the text (the present document) includes grammatical clarifications.
During the meeting of the Executive Committee on 3 rd December 2009, the Chair of the At-Large Advisory Committee requested Staff to prepare grammatical clarifications to Rev2. Staff were also requested to run five-day online vote on Rev3 of the text starting on 4 th December, the result of said vote being that the ALAC endorsed the Statement by a 14 – 0 vote. You may review the result of this vote under: https://www.bigpulse.com/p8273.