[ispcp] NEW VERSION - ISPCP Draft Comments on US Government ICANN MoU Inquiry

[Mark McFadden <mcfadden@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

All:

Here is version 1.3 of the ISPCP Response to the Department of 
Commerce's Request for Comments on the ICANN MoU. Once again, I have 
attached it in Microsoft Word and PDF formats.
Here are the substantial changes in the document:

- I have incorporated Greg's suggested text about formalizing the 
administration of the root servers in section 2.5 (page 4);
- I have changed the words "tragic attempt" to misguided attempt" in the 
discussion of weighted voting in section 2.4;
- I have tried to clarify the goal of improving existing relationships 
with other related Internet organizations in some text in section 2.7;
- After Tony's comment, I have removed the text related to the NRO in 
section 2.2 and 2.4;
I'd be very happy to have further comments from the Constituency for a 
final draft. I'd like to send our comments to Commerce in the next 48 
hours so please "Reply All" with comments as soon as you are able.
mark

Mark McFadden
Secretariat
ISPCP Constituency

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