Re: [dow3tf] Draft of Revised Preliminary Report

[Frannie Wellings <wellings@xxxxxxxx>]

Hi all -
I tried to send this yesterday evening, but just realized it didn't 
go through...

I have a summary of comments, but the public comments seem to keep 
coming along via ICANN's web site.  I don't want to leave anyone out 
so I'm going to refrain from sending this until tomorrow afternoon. 
Regarding the report, I've scratched my revisions as a result of the 
mixture of comments and will leave it up to group discussion on 
Friday.  I've asked Glen to let me know when they've finished combing 
through the comments and are sure they've got them all.  Best, F

At 11:41 AM -0400 7/7/04, Brian Darville wrote:
> Frannie:
>
> Please make sure that the summary of comments is a separate appendix 
> to the report.  Also, please prepare a redline version so that we 
> can all see the changes to the report that you are proposing in the 
> revised draft.
>
> Thank you.
>
> Brian Darville
>
> > > >  Frannie Wellings <wellings@xxxxxxxx> 07/07/04 11:29AM >>>
> Actually, I've been working diligently according to the original
> plan. So by the end of the day, I will have a revision of the report
> incorporating the summary of comments I've prepared.  I didn't
> anticipate a change of plans. Look forward to talking to you all soon
> and working towards consensus in this task force, Frannie
>
> At 09:51 AM -0400 07.07.2004, Brian Darville wrote:
> > I think it would make sense for you and Frannie to prepare a summary
> > of the comments which we can then include as an additional appendix
> > to the Final Report.  Please put that summary in final form so that
> > we will not need to edit it.  If possible, please circulate the
> > summary by the end of the day today.
> >
> > I will take the summary and then try to update the report, although
> > I don't anticipate that each comment would materially change the
> > report.
> >
> > > > >   "Ross Wm. Rader" <ross@xxxxxxxxxx> 07/07/04 09:39AM >>>
> > Brian Darville wrote:
> >
> > >   Frannie had indicated that she would work with Ross in providing a
> > > revised preliminary report incorporating the public comments
> > > provided through July 5, 2004.  Frannie said she would circulate
> > > that revised report for comment by the end of the day today.  After
> > > receiving the revised report the Task Force members should each
> > > promptly provide comments concerning the report so that we can
> > > incorporate those comments by Friday, July 9, 2004 so that the
> > > report can be submitted on Monday, July 12, 2004.
> >
> > What criteria should we use to include comments in the report? It was
> > actually my impression that Frannie and I were going to prepare a
> > summary of the relevant comments made in the various submissions but
> > that we wouldn't actually be touching the report itself. Will you and
> > Barbara be crafting the final report based on these comments or has this
> > somehow fallen to Frannie and I now?
> >
> > My preference is to complete our preparation of the summary of the
> > comments and not to do any work on the report itself.
> >
> > Clarification would be helpful as it currently isn't clear what is
> > expected from us nor are there any good precedents to fall back on.
> >
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> >                          -rwr
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> Frannie Wellings
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Frannie Wellings
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