Re: [dow3tf] Draft of Revised Preliminary Report

["Brian Darville" <BDARVILLE@xxxxxxxxx>]

Frannie:

Please make sure that the summary of comments is a separate appendix to the report.  Also, please prepare a redline version so that we can all see the changes to the report that you are proposing in the revised draft.

Thank you.

Brian Darville

>>> Frannie Wellings <wellings@xxxxxxxx> 07/07/04 11:29AM >>>
Actually, I've been working diligently according to the original 
plan. So by the end of the day, I will have a revision of the report 
incorporating the summary of comments I've prepared.  I didn't 
anticipate a change of plans. Look forward to talking to you all soon 
and working towards consensus in this task force, Frannie

At 09:51 AM -0400 07.07.2004, Brian Darville wrote:
>I think it would make sense for you and Frannie to prepare a summary 
>of the comments which we can then include as an additional appendix 
>to the Final Report.  Please put that summary in final form so that 
>we will not need to edit it.  If possible, please circulate the 
>summary by the end of the day today.
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>I will take the summary and then try to update the report, although 
>I don't anticipate that each comment would materially change the 
>report.
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>>>>  "Ross Wm. Rader" <ross@xxxxxxxxxx> 07/07/04 09:39AM >>>
>Brian Darville wrote:
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>>  Frannie had indicated that she would work with Ross in providing a 
>>revised preliminary report incorporating the public comments 
>>provided through July 5, 2004.  Frannie said she would circulate 
>>that revised report for comment by the end of the day today.  After 
>>receiving the revised report the Task Force members should each 
>>promptly provide comments concerning the report so that we can 
>>incorporate those comments by Friday, July 9, 2004 so that the 
>>report can be submitted on Monday, July 12, 2004.
>>
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>What criteria should we use to include comments in the report? It was
>actually my impression that Frannie and I were going to prepare a
>summary of the relevant comments made in the various submissions but
>that we wouldn't actually be touching the report itself. Will you and
>Barbara be crafting the final report based on these comments or has this
>somehow fallen to Frannie and I now?
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>My preference is to complete our preparation of the summary of the
>comments and not to do any work on the report itself.
>
>Clarification would be helpful as it currently isn't clear what is
>expected from us nor are there any good precedents to fall back on.
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