RE: [dow1tf] Final Preliminary Draft?

["Neuman, Jeff" <Jeff.Neuman@xxxxxxxxxx>]

Good question....Let me work on that.

-----Original Message-----
From: Paul Stahura [mailto:stahura@xxxxxxxx]
Sent: Thursday, May 27, 2004 1:04 PM
To: 'Neuman, Jeff'; 'dow1tf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx'
Subject: RE: [dow1tf] Final Preliminary Draft?


Jeff, where is the paragraph from the registries on their need/justification
for the whois data besides "its in the contracts"?


-----Original Message-----
From: owner-dow1tf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-dow1tf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On
Behalf Of Neuman, Jeff
Sent: Wednesday, May 26, 2004 5:40 PM
To: 'dow1tf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx'
Cc: Neuman, Jeff
Subject: [dow1tf] Final Preliminary Draft?

All,

Below is a redline and clean version of the Preliminary Draft v. 6.  I
believe I have captured all of the comments that were sent.  I ended up
putting most of them in the body of the report and only a few ended up in
footnotes.  If anyone disagrees with the placement of any of the footnotes
in this draft, please let me know.  In your comments back, you need to be
specific as to which footnote you believe should be moved up to the main
body.

One more note, I adopted some of the language from Milton on the 2
alternatives in the White List Discussion.  I also used my Chair's
discretion :) to name the second alternative the "Individual Use List."  You
will see this in the draft as well.

Anyway, I expect most of the comments at this point to be grammatical and
serious disagreements with the language.  PLEASE HELP WITH THE GRAMMATICAL
REVIEW AS I AM A LITTLE TO CLOSE TO THIS DRAFT TO CATCH EVERYTHING.  This
needs to be submitted by Friday.

We have been working on this draft for a long time.  Thanks to everyone for
their hard work in making this a reality!

Also, remember that this is only phase 1.  In the coming weeks we will need
you all to pay attention to the comments we receive so that we can do a
final draft.

Thanks again!!!!!

 <<Whois TF 1 - Preliminary Report v 0.6.doc>>  <<Redline 6.doc>> 

Jeffrey J. Neuman, Esq. 
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