Dear All,
To facilitate your review, I’ve incorporated Carlos’s proposed
edits in redline format in the attached version.
Carlos, please note that I made some minor editorial changes while
doing so (changed ‘rounds’ to ‘procedures’ in the first
sentence, and used the complete reference for the Health Index in
response (1)(I)(b)).
Please share any further comments and/or edits you may have by
Wednesday 27 July at the latest.
Best regards,
Marika
On 22/07/16 15:11, "Carlos Raúl Gutiérrez G." <crg@xxxxxxxxxxx>
wrote:
Thank you for the extra time. Some comments on the new text.
Additionally, listening to the feedback call between the GAC and
Board
shows that there is still a lot to do ( maybe in the GAC-GNSO
coordination group) to clarify the relations between the
GAC-BOARD-GNSO,
particularly of the role of individual GAC members participation
in
PDPs, as some Councillors have suggested.
In the case of the AoC Review Teams, it is my understanding that
the GAC
member elected to the Team is a full GAC rep, or not?
Wish you all a nice weekend
Carlos Raúl Gutiérrez
+506 8837 7176
Skype: carlos.raulg
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On 21 Jul 2016, at 17:20, Marika Konings wrote:
> Dear All,
>
> As discussed during today’s meeting, please find attached the
latest
> version of the GNSO Review of the GAC Communique. On page 7 you
will
> find the addition suggested by James in bold. Please review this
> document and share any comments and/or edits you may have by
Wednesday
> 27 July at the latest.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Marika
>
> Marika Konings
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