[council] amendments to original JAS motion

[Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hello,

I would like to suggest those friendly amendments (as compromise) to the
original JAS motion proposed by me and seconded by Bill:

I would like propose changing:

a) change "Establish the criteria for financial need and a method of
demonstrating that need." to "Propose the criteria for financial need and a
method of demonstrating that need."

b) change "Definition of mechanisms, e.g. a review committee that would need
to be established operating under the set " to "Propose mechanisms, e.g. a
review committee that could be established operating under the set "

c) Propose mechanism(s) for revenue income and other asset management to
support new gTLD applicants who meet the criteria as established in
objective (a) of this charter amendment.

d) Discuss with Backend Registry Service Providers the extent of of
coordination, to be given by Backend Registry Service Providers (e.g.
brokering the relationships, reviewing the operational quality of the
relationship) and propose methods for coordinating that assistance.

e) change "Discuss and establish methods" to "Discuss and propose" methods

f) change "Establish methods" to  "Propose methods"

g) change "establish policies and practices"  to "propose policies and
practices"

h) replace "propose a percentage of that fee could be waived for applicants
meeting the requirements for assistance."
with "propose a percentage of that fee that could be waived for applicants
meeting the requirements for assistance."

Regards

Rafik Dammak
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