[council] RE: Amendment to Motion to Pursue Whois Study # 1

[Liz Gasster <liz.gasster@xxxxxxxxx>]

Kristina and All,

Oops, there are too many words.

This is the current language:

Further resolved that ICANN staff be required to include all individual 
elements in the Whois data which surveyed sources in the descriptive study 
report have been misused are included in study analysis, and are not discarded 
or otherwise eliminated if the actual data source is unclear or multiple 
possible sources are found during online search verification.

See if this is clearer to understand, if not gracefully written (edits in 
caps/strikethroughs):

Further resolved that ICANN staff be required to include all individual 
elements in the Whois data which surveyed sources in the descriptive study 
IDENTIFY AS HAVING BEEN misused are included in study analysis, and are not 
discarded or otherwise eliminated if the actual data source is unclear or 
multiple possible sources are found during online search verification.

Does this help? (I can send around an edited version of the amendment) but 
wanted to verify first.

Liz
From: owner-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On 
Behalf Of Rosette, Kristina
Sent: Wednesday, August 04, 2010 9:45 AM
To: 'Gomes, Chuck'; Council GNSO
Subject: [council] RE: Amendment to Motion to Pursue Whois Study # 1

It could be sleep deprivation, but the third "Further resolved" doesn't seem to 
make any sense.  Is it missing any words or is it me?

________________________________
From: owner-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On 
Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck
Sent: Wednesday, August 04, 2010 11:20 AM
To: Council GNSO
Subject: [council] Amendment to Motion to Pursue Whois Study # 1
Importance: High

On behalf of the RySG, I would like to propose an amended version of the motion 
to proceed with Whois Study # 1 on misuse.  The proposed changes are 
highlighted in the attached file.

<<Motion Amendment for GNSO Council WHOIS Study 1 - 4 Aug 2010.docx>>

In my role as chair, I would like to ask Mike Rodenbaugh, who made the original 
motion, and Terry Davis, who seconded the motion, if they would consider the 
amendments friendly.

Chuck