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[dow2tf] Re: section 3.5 of TF2 draft report

I apologize for missing these as well. In tracking so many changes, it became a little difficult to make sure I was incorporating all of the edits from various drafts, although I see in this case that I managed to add extra points, just not add to the existing ones.

In any case, I've noted these changes as well and will include them in the final document.


On May 26, 2004, at 4:35 PM, Steve Metalitz wrote:

There is a similar glitch in the list of questions that concludes
section 3.5 -- a few of the edits that Kathy and I agreed upon, and
which she posted on Sunday, see
http://gnso.icann.org/mailing-lists/archives/dow2tf/msg00296.html, did
not make it into Jordyn's draft.  With those edits, questions (b) and
(c)  read as follows:

b) What contact data should be shown in the protected tier? How will the
data compare with what is now available? How will the accuracy compare
with what is now available?

c) What are the mechanisms available for identifying and authorizing those requesting access to protected information? Are those mechanisms fast? Are they affordable? Are they online? Who will administer them, using what criteria?

Steve Metalitz
-----Original Message-----
From: Jordyn A. Buchanan [mailto:jordyn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Wednesday, May 26, 2004 4:28 PM
To: Steve Metalitz
Cc: Maggie Mansourkia; 2DOW2tf; Marilyn Cade; Tom Keller
Subject: Re: section 2.4 of TF2 draft report

Thanks for pointing this out, Steve.  I'll revise the document to
reflect this change, unless someone objects to it.


On May 26, 2004, at 4:20 PM, Steve Metalitz wrote:

 I feel compelled to point out that the bullets at the very end of
section 2.4 do not reflect the slight modifications that Kathy and I
agreed upon over the weekend and I posted to the list Monday morning.
See http://gnso.icann.org/mailing-lists/archives/dow2tf/msg00300.html
Of course I still prefer Jordyn's version, since I originally drafted
it, but I wanted to bring this subsequent agreement to your attention,

and to suggest that folks react to the language in the Monday posting.

Steve Metalitz

-----Original Message-----
From: Jordyn A. Buchanan [mailto:jordyn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Wednesday, May 26, 2004 3:42 PM
To: Maggie Mansourkia
Cc: Marilyn Cade; Steve Metalitz; Tom Keller; '2DOW2tf'
Subject: Re: [dow2tf] Revised draft

Let me just add a couple of points that I think may help frame where

  Maggie is correct that there is certainly some additional work
remaining to be done before the tiered access plan can be acted upon.
What we have at this point is a concept, and not something that is
ready to be adopted at the Board (or probably even the Council) level.

It's possible that some or all of our questions have already been
addressed by TF #1, as they're supposed to be focusing on mechanisms
of providing access.  Also, we may get useful feedback through the
public comment process.  As we have some joint meetings with TF #1 and

see the results of the public comment process, we may be able to start

to answer the questions we've identified and solidify the policy
recommendation prior to the final report being issued.

If not, someone is going to have to do some further work, whether it
be in the form of another PDP or some sort of implementation

Having said all that, I can see how Steve's text could be construed a bit differently from the policy recommendations in 3.5. This is why I

proposed mirroring the language of the recommendation there in 1.4.
Do people have thoughts on my proposed language from earlier today?

Also, are there thoughts on Steve's proposed modifications to the
national law section in 1.4?

Finally, if you do have changes, please forward them to the list as
soon as possible.  We really need to get a final draft distributed and

voted upon to meet our Friday deadline.


On May 26, 2004, at 3:25 PM, Magnolia Mansourkia wrote:

But wouldn't another task force, study or something be necessary
anyway to address the viability, cost, etc.?? The point is that until

we have answers to these questions, we really don't know if the
concept (which is
can become a roadmap or policy description (which needs to explored

see if it can work).

I'd like to adopt change that the concept needs more work or
but I do agree with Jordyn that the goal of further exploration

be to answer the unanswered issues noted, not have a multi-leg or
redundant process in place.

I also have a couple of edits I'll be forwarding shortly.

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-dow2tf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Behalf Of Thomas Keller
Sent: Wednesday, May 26, 2004 1:13 PM
To: Steve Metalitz
Cc: Jordyn A. Buchanan; 2DOW2tf
Subject: Re: [dow2tf] Revised draft

To all,

I believe that the former version reflected the discussions we had
over the past month very good and therefore object against adopting
the new changes.
My interpretation of the DOW is that this taskforce has to recommend

solution for the problems identified as in scope of the taskforce and

not to refer this to yet another taskforce/steeringgroup whatsoever.
Please correct me if I'm wrong but that is exactly what "a topic of
further explanation" means to me.



Am 26.05.2004 schrieb Steve Metalitz:
Another alternative would simply be to put a period after
The specific questions could be left to sec. 3.5.

-----Original Message-----
From: Jordyn A. Buchanan [mailto:jordyn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Wednesday, May 26, 2004 11:22 AM
To: Steve Metalitz
Cc: 2DOW2tf
Subject: Re: [dow2tf] Revised draft

I'm hoping others will have an opportunity to review Steve's changes

fairly quickly.

Steve:  one thing I notice is that your proposed changes to the
tiered access provision seems to make even further exploration
dependent on resolving viability, financial feasability, etc.  I'm
not sure if that's the intent, but that's how it reads right now.


On May 26, 2004, at 10:54 AM, Steve Metalitz wrote:

Attached please find suggested edits to sec. 1.4 to bring this

closer into line with the content of the recommendations in sec.

(local law) and 3.5 (tiered access).

Steve Metalitz

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-dow2tf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
On Behalf Of Jordyn A. Buchanan
Sent: Tuesday, May 25, 2004 12:57 PM
To: '2DOW2tf'
Subject: [dow2tf] Revised draft

Hi all:

Sorry to send out another draft, but Glen was kind enough to

me with most of the links listed in the documents.  I've added

and in the process moved just about all links into footnotes.  I
imagine in the HTML version of the document, they'll simply become

This version of the document is also relative to last week's

so if you haven't yet looked at the version from last night, don't
bother.  This tracks changes included in that document as well.


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