[dow1tf] Final Preliminary Draft?
All, Below is a redline and clean version of the Preliminary Draft v. 6. I believe I have captured all of the comments that were sent. I ended up putting most of them in the body of the report and only a few ended up in footnotes. If anyone disagrees with the placement of any of the footnotes in this draft, please let me know. In your comments back, you need to be specific as to which footnote you believe should be moved up to the main body. One more note, I adopted some of the language from Milton on the 2 alternatives in the White List Discussion. I also used my Chair's discretion :) to name the second alternative the "Individual Use List." You will see this in the draft as well. Anyway, I expect most of the comments at this point to be grammatical and serious disagreements with the language. PLEASE HELP WITH THE GRAMMATICAL REVIEW AS I AM A LITTLE TO CLOSE TO THIS DRAFT TO CATCH EVERYTHING. This needs to be submitted by Friday. We have been working on this draft for a long time. Thanks to everyone for their hard work in making this a reality! Also, remember that this is only phase 1. In the coming weeks we will need you all to pay attention to the comments we receive so that we can do a final draft. Thanks again!!!!! <<Whois TF 1 - Preliminary Report v 0.6.doc>> <<Redline 6.doc>> Jeffrey J. Neuman, Esq. Director, Law & Policy NeuStar, Inc. Loudoun Tech Center 46000 Center Oak Plaza Building X Sterling, VA 20166 p: (571) 434-5772 f: (571) 434-5735 e-mail: Jeff.Neuman@xxxxxxxxxx Attachment:
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